I do also agree that I am rushing this part a bit, but that is partially to get to what most people are here for… Sex indian not bad for a start. You obviously have a story to tell in your head and you want to get it out. One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. That is a very good point. Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi body), I completely forgot he was tied up xD. Also please forgive my lack of punctuation. Also please forgive my lack of punctuation. That is a very good point. This eliminates relying on literary intuition or repetative he said she said. Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi
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